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revision of final paper

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In my revision of my final paper a methods section was added to help the argument be more exigent as well as giving the reader background information to better connect with the argument through pathos and ethos.  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OFmnRUdWeukkWNqfwX1JS3q-OEW_rkOI9fWaxN3niWc/edit?usp=sharing

Link to first submission of final paper

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1x0esIrITK_0yRvOaE6MafPHtGuVJRelToyWlDgoOdy8/edit?usp=sharing

Discussion board for rough draft of final paper

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A screenshot of some comments given to my rough draft of my final paper. The rough draft is very short and not much information is given, therefore the comments were not very helpful. 

revised annotated bibliography link and screenshot

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Kf5tgTqRxHNzIVWGiP3p963tPf6R-0fAEFe6lfVW4jc/edit?usp=sharing Screenshot of  revised draft of annotated bibliography, quotations are used as well as effective summary.

feedback from professor of annotated bibliography first submission

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first try annotated bibliography link and screenshot

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WoEv1WDPVqjJ0Wkwbviau9QJLcX0dza5QmezHLbzUPA/edit?usp=sharing This is a screenshot of a section in my first submission of my annotated bibliography. A source that I found to be very unnecessary to my argument.